Hold your breathe
Till death
For beautiful rainbow to appear
That shall emerge near
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Nice Joey The Ace15 minutes ago Loved the positive ending. Full of hope. Comment +2
Strong Images Erika Syphax12 minutes ago Powerful. Comment +1
Structure Well Gardenia Mae11 minutes ago It's a bit dull but the structure and flow is fairly well done. Keep writing!
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