Hold Back Thy Tides Of Malcontent Comments

You are an ardent believer in the Divine.Right? Wel me too.. May be thats why many of ur poems ve a positive note..But I think the ideas in ur poems will look more beautiful if you adopt a simpler style and diction.. my humble suggestion..dnt know whether i am upto judge others..

Do not open the door, less you're ready! ! ! Life could be cruel, but still afordable and ample for us to lead.The unexpected were inenvitable........take it as a challenge.Struggle is part of our survival on Earth.Nice piece you have got here Hayes!