Friday, June 19, 2009

Hold A Mirror Comments

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He came one night, in a drifting dream;
Setting a unsettling thought.
Like a poor cricketer
On wrong foot I was caught
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Nikunj Sharma
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Beatifully rhymed. Your poem is very deep and very powerful. Makes me think twice about my life.

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Deborah Cromer 02 July 2009

Good insight. Nice depth into knowing right from wrong. Lending that helping hand can make a difference in somebody's life. DC

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Raj Nandy 02 July 2009

I LOVE THE LAST PARA! MAY YOU LIVE LIKE THAT ALWAYS, WITH THE BLESSINGS OF THE LORD! 10! -RAJ

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Danny H 23 June 2009

the thoughts an imagery i witnessed in this poem was beautiful

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I woke up, not to sleep again My righteous self with me to remain All my life ….. To walk the talk and walk till end An opportunity godsend To do some good before death To breathe at last a benevolent breath....... beautiful write and indepth views expressed... good thinking and i like it......10 read mine'My friend in mirror' and 'did you see? ... comment critically

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Nikunj Sharma

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