Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Hobos Comments

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With twisted hats
And wrinkled coats
In hobo's hands
They come atote
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Jon Contrastano
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Barry A. Lanier 19 February 2009

Jon this one is great but I'd like to see more...sort of reminds me of when I wrote Man At The Railroad Track.....there's more to the story than we see....

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