Perhaps you've read the tale of the red-tailed horse
who, after she ate eight bowls of ice cream, felt no remorse.
That night, feet uncovered, she slept on her couch (no small feat!) .
Like an arctic tern she did toss and turn, in her room with no heat.
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I got a laugh out of this poem because I can relate to how the horse must have felt after eating eight bowls of ice cream. And being lactate intolerant I'd probably have been forced to sleep on the couch too. :) I enjoyed your poem and was thoroughly entertained.
....you definitely penned a wonderful poem...I am very happy she lived: I repeat comments of the Sunprincess.
Come on, admit it, you've never done English Tutoring. Take it from a grammar teacher and prolific author. Or, did I miss something? I got a ha-ha all the way through this one. Adeline
Another funny write full of delight. So entertaining and great rhyme. Enjoyed reading it.10++++++++