Friday, May 4, 2012

Hoarse Red-Tailed Horse.....[short; English Language; Humor; Fantasy] Comments

Rating: 2.9

Perhaps you've read the tale of the red-tailed horse
who, after she ate eight bowls of ice cream, felt no remorse.
That night, feet uncovered, she slept on her couch (no small feat!) .
Like an arctic tern she did toss and turn, in her room with no heat.
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Bri Edwards
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 June 2018

Another funny write full of delight. So entertaining and great rhyme. Enjoyed reading it.10++++++++

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Beach Girl 14 December 2014

I got a laugh out of this poem because I can relate to how the horse must have felt after eating eight bowls of ice cream. And being lactate intolerant I'd probably have been forced to sleep on the couch too. :) I enjoyed your poem and was thoroughly entertained.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 May 2014

....you definitely penned a wonderful poem...I am very happy she lived: I repeat comments of the Sunprincess.

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Brian Jani 10 May 2014

Wow very nice poem

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Adeline Foster 14 November 2012

Come on, admit it, you've never done English Tutoring. Take it from a grammar teacher and prolific author. Or, did I miss something? I got a ha-ha all the way through this one. Adeline

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