Ho-Hum Doldrum Poem by Aqua Flower

Ho-Hum Doldrum

Rating: 5.0


Physically you are there
but why do I feel a loss somehow
when I asked you, you seemed not the care
where do we stand now now?
Ho Hum....doldrum
What happened to our fire?
Do you feel the same desire
The moon is still in my eyes
Stars are falling into my palms
Let's make magic
show me your charms
Or are your tricks lost at sea
come my love take my lead

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Monday, July 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: boredom,love and life,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Riza Braholli 24 July 2018

What happened to our fire? Do you feel the same desire The moon is still in my eyes Stars are falling into my palms.... beautiful poetry... love is expressed through the call of him. And offers a bounty of heavenly beauty: the moon, the stars... congrats. by dr riza

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Aqua Flower 24 July 2018

Thank you for appreciating the lines that were my favorite. It is a call. It takes two to keep the flame alive!

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Rini shibu 24 July 2018

Interesting write about the feeling of loss, well penned

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Aqua Flower 24 July 2018

Thank you for and commenting. The title popped in my head after writing it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2018

Feeling a loss somehow is so sad. But we hope love will be revived with friendship. Trick of love will bring charm. An amazing poem is well penned...10

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Aqua Flower 23 July 2018

Hope and dreams keep love alive to be revived but it takes two. Thank you for reading and replying

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