Physically you are there
but why do I feel a loss somehow
when I asked you, you seemed not the care
where do we stand now now?
Ho Hum....doldrum
What happened to our fire?
Do you feel the same desire
The moon is still in my eyes
Stars are falling into my palms
Let's make magic
show me your charms
Or are your tricks lost at sea
come my love take my lead
copyright @ Aqua Flower
Thank you for and commenting. The title popped in my head after writing it.
Feeling a loss somehow is so sad. But we hope love will be revived with friendship. Trick of love will bring charm. An amazing poem is well penned...10
Hope and dreams keep love alive to be revived but it takes two. Thank you for reading and replying
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What happened to our fire? Do you feel the same desire The moon is still in my eyes Stars are falling into my palms.... beautiful poetry... love is expressed through the call of him. And offers a bounty of heavenly beauty: the moon, the stars... congrats. by dr riza
Thank you for appreciating the lines that were my favorite. It is a call. It takes two to keep the flame alive!