Tuesday, January 1, 2019

Hny-2019 Comments

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hope, the seed since last years of life
abloom on the way to the future
pacified the pabulum to walk ahead
parched by the panacea for every step
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Aniruddha Pathak 03 January 2019

Acrostics is not my cup of tea, but this one stands out like a 'fresh breath'. Happy Nrw Year Mahtab Bangalee and thanks for sharing this poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 January 2019

Fresh breath! ! ! Earth, With the muse of mankind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 January 2019

On every New Year we start with hopes but end it with frustrations. A thoughtful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 January 2019

UR poetry has so many words I have to google why don't you at the end as NOTES give a glossary' twill save time of oldies half blind like me o young poet @33 we all love ur superfine poetry

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2019

enabling our insightful intimacy enamoring palette of heart in variety naturally making all noble, noble and noble ...... a wonderful poem...... you have used a lot of words which gave me goosebumps........... thank u dear poet Mahtab. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 January 2019

nevertheless, we live on fresh breath of nerve in the path of mundane idealistic human love...beautiful expression! Wish you a happy and prosperous new year 2019

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M Asim Nehal 01 January 2019

HAPPY NEW CALENDAR YEAR, A fantastic poem on the eve of new beginning.

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