Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Hm, What Now? Comments

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So now I am here
At this hour
On this day
I've prepared for it
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Liliana EL.
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Vlad Mutuleanu 23 October 2013

Questions that every person will sooner or later ask themselves. I like how you built up your poem and especially how it ends. I believe that every great poem should end in a rhyme. Thank you!

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