Saturday, January 21, 2012

Hitting Rock Bottom.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

With you on that side..
With me on this side..

It's the gab between you and me..
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Rick Adriolo
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Khloe Chase 28 January 2012

I.love.this.poem. By the way, you commented on my Let Me Be Me poem, and i decided to check out your stuff :) This is really good. The reader can really feel your emotion and it is portrayed beautifully. The imagery is spectacular, especially because it's figurative. I can really picture the scene here, even though it's not technically a scene. Marvelous

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Dave Walker 21 January 2012

A great poem, like it, a good write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Mental Hospital. It's a true story.

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