History Of My World: 02- The Moment Of Birth Comments

The waves of singular desire emanating out of nowhere, The pulsating horizon turned orange, the womb of eternity started contracting into a sphere of promising future, And a baby of the first Spark of existence was born. Sir beautiful describe nice poem10+++++++

It was the moment, The cosmic moment of birth Of temporal time. The poem gives a pious feeling after reading it, don't know why. Can't just say it is nice. 10+++++++

A beautiful imagination about the history of birth of the universe. 10+++ for it.

Big bang rediscoverd and redefined in a lucid poetic style.

When there was a moment- a thin line separating the shape and forms from the created, the events and phenomena from their happening. Lovely poem so nicely penned. 10+++

a thin line separating the shape and forms from the created, the events and phenomena from their happening. It was the moment, The cosmic moment of birth Of temporal time. The poem gives a pious feeling after reading it, don't know why. Can't just say it is nice. 10+++++++++++

It was the hour When there was a moment- a thin line separating the shape and forms from the created, A beautiful imagination about the history of birth of the universe. 10+++ for it.

Well penned about the creation The baby of first spark Of existence was born.. The cosmic moment