Thursday, November 9, 2017

History Of My World: 01- The Cosmic Moment Comments

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It was the hour,
The hour before the dawn,
The dawn of our universe,
The dawn of our space
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Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

amidst the myriad of songs of unuttered lyrics of unsung love in the womb of eternity. Lovely sharing.10+++

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Sonali Parida 11 November 2017

It was that hour When a cosmic moment was going to trigger a birth - Simply superb poem sir. 10++++

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Prativa Rani 11 November 2017

birth of a desire to be born, amidst the myriad of songs of unuttered lyrics of unsung love in the womb of eternity. What a great idea conceived sir? 10+++

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Alina Kaikeyi 11 November 2017

When a cosmic moment was going to trigger a birth - birth of a desire to be born, amidst the myriad of songs of unuttered lyrics of unsung love in the womb of eternity. Lovely sharing.10+++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 11 November 2017

The poem is just a big bang sir.No exaggeraion.Nice

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