His Wait Comments

very well written in few lines..waiting for acceptance has under tone of romance..lovely

wait is an inevitable part of love...but at one point it should end...sooner the better it would be...good expressive write on the subject selected...10

Nicer than this who can write about a man's pursuit for his beloved, that too by a female gender. done beautifully.

the poet knows that he is waiting.. nicely said in verse..

His wait so intense as desert waits for rain, fools waits for sane. But his purpose was to give not to gain. Intense Poem

short and sweet very nice words nicely done. Please read some of my poems when you get the chance especially my poem called ' A DREAM' thank you so much

Nice poem. Simple and sweet. Thanks...