Wednesday, November 14, 2012

His Touch Comments

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She leaned against the brick wall,
Letting him feel her body.
His hands rested gently on her waist,
He looked into her hazel eyes.
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Anil Kumar Panda 20 November 2012

there is an emotional touch in it.very nice.simple and beautiful.liked it.

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Tammie Aimson 19 November 2012

yep it always goes like that. i am a failer when it comes to love i cant get it right but sometimes its not me. very good. really short but fangtastic keeps you hooked.

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Anthony Han 17 November 2012

Simple and clear, keep it up!

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Brandon Mcconnell 16 November 2012

it sounds so bittersweet

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Asif Andalib 15 November 2012

Short, sweet and sad love poem. I enjoyed it

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Vijay Sai R 14 November 2012

a touch of romance indeed...

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