His Star Comments

very powerful words one day your star will shine

his star wasn`t born and didn`t die................................... touching and deep..... me too by the way, but i decided to live for me, noha and done

His star wasn't born and didn't die, that is powerful.

there are many stars out there waiting to shine upon you May God and angels come to you tonight and lift your spirit .... this moment and forever

you are the star and you're alive! ! ! !

very firm and imaginitive poem. Although I have never thought about killing myself for real thoughts like that come up in my mind every so often. Writing helps me shake everything out. and this poem is a good reflective of your love for another.

A wonderful, strong poem. U ger 10++.........

wow... i thought im the only one..but i definetly not a sucidal type, its fun in living with so much pain inside and an extremely great pleasure to feel dead even tho i keep on living and breathing....in few lines you have wrote a very power and beautiful poem and i loved it...thanks 10++++++ and A++++++ rgds asif

BLUE EYES, PRETTY POWERFULLY PUT! AS SULAIMAN MOHD YOSUF SAID, YOU ARE A TALENT! DON'T STOP WRITING. YOU SHARED WITH US WHAT MOST HAVE EXPERIENCED, TO ONE DEGREE OR ANOTHER, IN OUR LIVES. UNREQUITED LOVE IS A BORE AND IT IS TRULY PAINFUL AND FRUSTRATING. YET, IT IS PART OF THE PATH THAT LEADS TO KNOWING OURSELVES, WHAT WE TRULY NEED AND WANT. ALSO, HEIGHTENS OUR AWARENESS OF OTHERS AND HOW WE RELATE TO THEM. LOVE YOURSELF TO THE MAX AND DON'T EVER CONSIDER SUICIDE, PROMISE? MY VERY BEST, CAROL

There is more things in life we are looking forward to and life is very precious.Although love is a important part but it is not everything.Do treasure ones life! Anywhere it is a good write.

great job can u comment my pomes plz? thanks

I like the poem, I would say that suicide is a strong word to use but some times its just a feeling, I like the part where you say his star was not born and did not die its has feeling, a out there way to explain it.

sad nor blue be commit no suicide face difficulties then your the STAR +++10 anju

that life at large is just a lie his star wasn`t born and didn`t die I love this one

your poem made me realize something. i love your poems

Oh Great Poem Dere Blue Eyes!

nice piece..describes sadness and hopelessness.......great job...able to bring out the sadness in every reader....depressing but great poem...

You're the star in the making.Keep writing!

wow, this is deep, and so sweet, keep writing!

hmm....oh very interesting