His Smile An Unknown Mystery Comments

Smiles truly can brighten other people's day.. I like this..

Hi Yulissa! i love your poem. I can feel it comes straight from the heart.

Hi Yulissa - Your poems are so so lovely. I like the structure of this one and it has a nice rythm and a nice flow - easy to recite - I score it MAX. When writing poetry SPELLING and GRAMMAR are of paramount importance - I have tweeked it to rectify some minor mistakes - ask your English Teacher to go through it with you. The content of all your poems is excellent As I walked past your smile It lit up my day because........... On a bad day you suddenly Make it a wonderful day And an awesome day - Your smile makes it - An excellent day - that why Your smile is driving me so ridiculously crazy! Why? - Nobody knows because.............. Love is a mystery - love is unknown Love will always be UNKNOWN. I have only made a few minor alterations to improve the flow! Love you in Poetry - JOHN.