Sunday, November 11, 2007

His Poetry In Motion Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gently spinning, twirling …..Silence the golden sound
Crisp ashy brown
Falling down
Golden yellow, amber red
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Patricia Gale
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Chuck Audette 21 November 2007

A mighty oak and a muse in fall. A lovely image, not confusing at all. - chuck

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 November 2007

Beautiful display of resplendent imagework, princess...Glad i stopped by to visit on site this late Sunday night...Hope you are well.Happy Thanksgiving. ~ ~ ~

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W J (Skip) Henderson Jr 18 November 2007

I am quite impressed in your use of imagery! Subtlety used at its finest, masterful! Proves the tenet that less is more in language as your imagery broadens ones scope of understanding.

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You invite your reader into the most serene, engaging, poetic of worlds. t x

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 November 2007

Patricia, I don't know how you do it, but your poetry seems to have such a timeless beauty to it, it's so peaceful and it sweeps over you touching your soul.. Just beautiful work lady, if only I could give you more than ten...10+

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Thad Wilk 11 November 2007

Hi Patricia! Your poetry has captured His Poetry in Motion, His poetry supreme! (10) ! Thad

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Dylan Sharkey 11 November 2007

One of the nicest poems I've read in a fair while. Very, very good. Keep up the great work.

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