His Pain Our Salvation Comments

Only Jesus Christ can save us..wonderful faith...well expressed poem...God bless...Mari

To off set all the bad things mentioned in the poem, we must except Him as our savior, then ask His forgiveness and follow Him. that's What He wants. A good write. Lynn

I don't quite know how to comment on the content of this religious poem. I can only say that your religious doctrine is quite evidence in this poem but due to the dogmatic implications the poem presents, I love your flow of word. Keep writing...that's what we poets do.

gr8 poem...keep writing...this is da way god wants to use you...preach(: ...lots of love..god bless you

Excellent evangelistic expressions my friend.

I can't say much spiritual wise but poetic wise this was amazing. you wrote with true feeling on this subject and i have to admit it was very good :) i cant wait to read more of you poems. Summer

Overall this was well written, and this line 'A world of believers of evil and creators of felonies all combusted in flames of fantasies of hatred' took me on a downward spiral my favorite line

Gregory, you are truly writing by the inspiration of the Holy Spirit. This is the Spirit of prophecy. Continue to stay open to Him, be Spirit led. God Bless. Love D

My HEAVENLY FATHER smitten and afflicted, the tears of blood and the lashes of gold -this is my favorite part. i totally agree w/this poem. n fact i knw sumone who does not believe n God&tries to make me turn away from him, but when i asked that person to define love he immediately went to the Bible. i find it funny how the world thinks nothing of God until something is bad.

He was bruised for our iniquities; we were freed for HIS pleasure and righteousness -- Great Write my friend i agree we do not value the worth of his sufferings