Thursday, February 12, 2015

His Own April Fool Comments

Rating: 4.8

My oldest brother came up with a plan
For tomorrow's April Fools day for the clan.
He replaced the sugar in the bowl with salt.
It was a simple plan, but it had a fault
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Spock the Vegan
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The Oldest Brother 03 November 2021

Your memory is ALMOST correct. I did NOT replace the sugar in the bowl with salt. I just carefully added one teaspoon of salt to the top of the sugar in the bowl.

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Leeann Azzopardi 07 March 2020

A prefect poem for a trying day Bravo! Encore!

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Chinedu Dike 16 December 2019

That a beautiful creation written with a tinge of humour. I like your style of writing, Spock. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Raj Arumugam 26 September 2016

Nothing like falling into one's own trap, Spock the Vegan....A memorable poem

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Spock The Vegan 26 September 2016

Yes, poetic justice.

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John Brown 29 June 2016

Clever little poem - I like it.

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

Thanks. Some days a good one comes together.

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Sarah Persson 12 June 2016

I think we can all picture this at the breakfast table. Made me smile. Thank you

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

Thank you too. My pleasure.

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Elisabeth Wingle 04 June 2016

Great poem, I just love family stories, especially funny ones.There is nothing better, than sitting with my siblings and hearing those rwo words .remember when.....

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

Thanks. It's great remembering family stories like this.

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Rigzen Angmo 30 November 2015

This is really good one: D

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

Thank you very much (3)

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Akhtar Jawad 22 November 2015

He found out the joke was very cruel, When he became his own April fool. Enjoyed it and followed the message hidden in it. An interesting poem.

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

Thanks. I don't usually like April fools Day, but this one I did.

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Kim Barney 11 October 2016

Followed the message hidden in it? I missed the hidden message. What was it?

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Beatrice Preti 18 October 2015

Cleverly written!

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

Thanks. It's fun putting rhymes to true stories.

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Pamela Sinicrope 18 October 2015

That's pretty funny! Thanks for sharing...

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

Thank you too. These poems are like a journal entry. A reminder of days gone by.

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Kelly Kurt 09 April 2015

Instant Karma. Good poem. Thanks for sharing

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Kim Barney 15 February 2015

Ha ha ha ha ha! That is great! Your brother sure fooled himself with that trick! Another great poem, maybe your best yet. I have voted it a ten.

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