Tuesday, October 11, 2011

His Only Face Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon's pockmarked-
But it's in my dreams,
Deeply etched, though invisibly.
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Patti Masterman
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Eric Cockrell 12 October 2011

strong, powerful images... as usual!

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Smoky Hoss 12 October 2011

Your name has changed... your talent remains, and grows! ! !

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Sam Aleks 11 October 2011

Beautiful and enigmatic, I love the overall imagery of the text and great use of simile and alliteration. An enjoyable read.

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