Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, January 16, 2012

His Misadventure Comments

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He rushed towards me to cause the damage
His body was completely shaking in rage
I could notice uncontrollable movement in his chase
He lowered his fist to deliver the blow on face
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 January 2012

JRNightingale 2012.01.17 23: 39 Compassion to those that act severely to us can break down barriers and defuse a situation. It is also an intelligent tactical response. Interesting. Reply

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Dead Rose 17 January 2012

an excellent poem amzing flow 10******** Rose)))))))))

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Lilian Chromious Eveson 17 January 2012

Nice peace of work, the way the person with the point of view handled the situation very well was indeed a very friendly thing to do. It really reminds readers to believe in facts and not in gossips with no proof, and to feel sorry when they are ones who are wrong. Nicely written!

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Deep Mukherjee 17 January 2012

i liked the poem; and i think it's ironic of any confrontation! ! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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