His Masterpiece Comments

Great one, He is The Master poet and creator, and I see Him working in you dear girl. c

indeed that is the masterpiece...when we can create something beautiful from something that was not.....

A moral message and (incidentally) a lesson in poetry at the same time. Cut away what is not needed, from your life or from a poem, and the result will be a better poem, or a better person.

I like this in every way, and the ending is excellent.

Yes, something deep going on with that poem. As we work our art and perfect our craft maybe most importantly we change our hearts. Creativity will us a way. Inspiring.10/10.

a nice piece..and a beautiful one..grace

What a clever and wonderful tale. You are very talented. Ruthy: -)