His Lovely Lady Comments

Vow! Gorgeous, attractive, deadly! Does she have a name? Pen in hand you turn into a Magician creating a magic which is amazing, beautiful, attractive. I'm feeling dizzy, my mind is still spinning. after the first part.....Not voting as 10 is not enough for this brilliance.

Such profound feelings going unnoticed is sad!

Romantic, vivid and compelling. Perhaps, as Karin suggests, there will be a sequel.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra

Success goes to those who dare... a good descriptive write, Sandra...well formatted lines conveying your story there...10

Brilliant images jump form the page here Sandra...excellent piece...Fi 10+++

This is very different Sandra and filled with intrigue and mystique. Who is she, do tell. Maybe it may be a sequel. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

my goshhhhhhhhhh...this is finely done...hope this lovely lady is meee...lolz.. i guess this lovely lady is as pretty as me am just jokin dear sandy.. smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...naizz

glad that i am not a lovely lady..I might be the cause of his agony..LOL this is lovely indeed.. Hugs, meggie

how lucid this love poem is! i twise read.10

matters as these can't hang in uncertainities, can they?

Knowing that she is indifferent and silent why waste your time going behind her...instead straight at her face some day just propose to bring the issue to an end...good write

He still craves this beauteous creature So will someone tell his lovely lady, That her silence is killing him.......... despite all the praise, the silence puzzles.. oh what a beautiful write. well cone. i have reprhrased line as suggested by you.

'He still craves this beauteous creature So will someone tell his lovely lady, That her silence is killing him' Lovely and lovely, 10

poor chap...interesting write here sandra...a natural style of your own..the poem flows well...10

wowwwwwwww lovely poem Sandra, but after all that if she turns around with a NO then what happens to him -10 anjali

Well thought out poem Sandra, hope she doesn't spurn his advances 10 Lynda xx

seemingly indifferent nature...........a love hidden to himself that keeps the agony of the man in love..............10

a one-sided love poem...well penned.. 'She has nothing to fear As he will always remain beside her To love, protect and guard her' gud 1.