Wednesday, December 24, 2008

His Love To Her Comments

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Kolitha Lelwala
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Onelia Avelar 12 January 2009

Wow, the love seen like 'nibbling an unripe mangoe' what a wonderful delicious metaphor! I have never read such a sweet simile for one's love to someone. Bravo!

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Sandra Fowler 01 January 2009

You say little to say much. Very unique imagery. Kind regards, Sandra

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 January 2009

true but if it is for the audience, , ,10

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ppp sss 31 December 2008

It's amazing how short as this piece is, the words make me very aware of my mouth, almost a puckering. I find this a unique sensation.

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