Saturday, November 28, 2009

His Love Is A Dagger Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your eyes hold me hostage;
encompassed in a sea of darkness
flecks of light coalesce.
Captive, held in bleak gardens
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Krissy Disillusion
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Gilbert Trevino 01 December 2009

I feel only what is coming from the heart, It is what it is. its out thier. Thanks Gil

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There seems to be a lot of anger here, or maybe just pain? I love your diction. I can really picture what your describing.

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