His Life Is Suicide To Mine Comments
Black fox belt buckle, Shirt Fits Tight
He is doing it, so it feels right
Black Girls I was, Done wit them
He Likes White Girls, And I wanted to be more like him
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Nice alliteration and assonance of words...fine rhyming too...well done! ! !
very nicely done, good flow to i'll say it was the best one i read today...10.. keep up the good work
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9/10/2025 12:14:39 PM # 1.0.0
i like the story and the visual you put in my head, the poem was a clear window into your life.