Tuesday, August 14, 2018
His Last Day Comments
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They all surround him life flies on a carcass
Contemplating about his end of days
He struggles to grasp little air
To see more days.
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Rajnish Manga
14 August 2018
An emotional write- death doing its routine and people doing theirs. Thanks, Dear Poet.
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Njuguna Peter Mnyagia
14 August 2018
it was so sad to see how his 'friends' watched him die and did not help.
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7/27/2025 10:45:48 PM # 1.0.0
They all surround him life flies on a carcass- - ] missprint? life perhaps was supposed to be like? Contemplating about his end of days / He struggles to grasp little air / To see more days.- - - -] Life everywhere should be honored and when it is passing, it is a tragic thing.
it was so painful