Tuesday, May 20, 2008

His Kiss Comments

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we stood in the doorway
his hands on my waist
the clock tickling loudly
almost in haste
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louise smith
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so cute. i love that feeling and you expressed it really well.

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William Jackson 23 May 2008

Well said! Romantic expression of the intoxication of young love!

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