His Kiss Comments

Chilling!

Strikingly brilliant depiction of the deception. Love is just a chemical reaction. Only when we realize the true human nature we will be content with life.

Excellent and impeccable piece.....as always.....

Deeply felt grief so touchingly expressed in succinct verse. And what a great analogy!

Nature can be calming but callous, just like the betrayal of a lover who betrays ones trust. These words transcend into feelings we have all felt.

Powerfully painted imagery that goes straight to the heart! .. Excellently expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

Beautiful poetry. Heart touching. Loved it.

you nailed the heartache and betrayal of loving a man who is a cheater -always has been, always will be, the cheating man has a cold heart, he can ape the words of a lover but they are just memorized lines--so well written, my dear, top score and faved

To my favorites Rose Marie!

the morning dew touched the inner heart of devotion!

excellent poetic imagination.Regards to u Mam

A dawn revelation of deception is evoked. A lovely poem. It is in my Favorites.

Beautiful poem! This is how a natural scene can rewind our memory track.

A poem so painfully and delicately concieved it flow right into our hearts, so strongly and unforgettably. A very sad but beautiful work.

Your deep, deep pain, reflected by tears akin to morning dew so poetically conceived, increase the flow of the pain of betrayle

A marvellous poem, dear friend Rose, Kudos! ........10

A cold kiss is most unworthy! As LeeAnn writes he is not deserve the lady's Love.

I have come back to add this beautiful brevity to My Favourites.

This magnificent poem touches my heart deeply..5 Stars full on Top.

2) it's how our mood is at that moment, your beautiful poem about this event, I still remember, but what I appreciate most in you, you have kept your self-esteem. I got very sad, but that wasn't true love, certainly not.