His Heart Is Troubled Comments

Oh well done good sir! I like this, short and sweet and nice and neat. 'Heart, inner battles, ravens and doves, brittle prayers, bold dreams' All so precisely woven together to deliver a well presented/crafted message. Torn and troubled delivered in so few poetic words. Superb! A full score Dominic for a rich display. Take care and keep writing quality poetry for you always deliver nothing less.