His Heart Is Troubled Poem by DM W

His Heart Is Troubled

Rating: 5.0


His heart is troubled by endless inner battles between
Ravens and doves. His brittle prayers do not match his bold dreams.

Tuesday, September 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: torn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 12 September 2020

Oh well done good sir! I like this, short and sweet and nice and neat. 'Heart, inner battles, ravens and doves, brittle prayers, bold dreams' All so precisely woven together to deliver a well presented/crafted message. Torn and troubled delivered in so few poetic words. Superb! A full score Dominic for a rich display. Take care and keep writing quality poetry for you always deliver nothing less.

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