Wednesday, March 1, 2006

His Hands Comments

Rating: 4.3

Turn oil into clouds
Trees into one story abodes
Deep creases tell a story
Salty on my lips
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Tara Crown
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Theresa Rayman 15 March 2006

What a beautiful, image filled poem! Such wonderful expression in this little gem. Very nice work. Blessings- TGR

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Gina Onyemaechi 06 March 2006

Every line here offers some delicious, tantalising image, Tara. Lovely words. Warm regards, Gina.

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Scarlett Treat 05 March 2006

This makes me think of the Anne Geddes babies, curled into the leaf of a tree or flower. The uncurling, the reaching, the feeling are all so well expressed. Scarlett

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