Sunday, July 1, 2018

His Hand In Mine Comments

Rating: 5.0

I trudged my way across the land
I tried so hard to take a stand
Doing what the good book said
Sometimes veering off the road instead.
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Marilyn Lott
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Hassan Hayati 21 July 2018

Reinforcing trust and hope. there is always a new flicker of hope, and that light of hope makes you strong to stand the hardest moment, this is what I found here in this poem. congratulations for being chosen as Poem of the day.

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Practicing Poetess 21 July 2018

A testimony of your faith, appearing in poetic verse- - Lovely job on this! Inspiring, and rightfully deserving of Poem of the Day!

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Kelly Kurt 20 July 2018

Has god ever actually spoken to you? Have you ever wondered WHY you Believe? The hands I hold are human I understand why Even how The majority still deny their own eyes As long as it leads to peace and love I am with you

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Kim Barney 20 July 2018

Very nice, Marilyn. A truly uplifting, spiritual poem. Your faith is showing through. Congratulations on having this chosen as member poem of the day! Best one we've had in quite some time.

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Lyn Paul 20 July 2018

A Beautiful flow of positivity to start the day. There are times when we all need a hand.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 July 2018

A beautiful poem having trust and belief on God. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Howard Mcdougal 20 July 2018

Nice piece thank you for sharing

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Savita Tyagi 20 July 2018

Such a lovely poem. A testament of our struggles and our faith. Congratulations Marilyn Lott for an outstanding poem.

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Thank you, Savita

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 July 2018

Oh help me! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Thank you, Edward!

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Thelma Lott 20 July 2018

Great poem. I enjoy reading them

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Thank you, Thelma!

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Siddartha Montik 20 July 2018

Nice feelings very well expressed Poetically! ! 10+

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Thank you so very much, Siddartha!

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Adrian Flett 20 July 2018

The rhyme and rhythm seem too laboured for my ear.

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

I'm sorry to hear that but, to each his own!

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Khairul Ahsan 20 July 2018

A nice poem with a beautiful graphic and an appropriate title. 'with His hand in mine Yes, I do think I will be just fine! ' - only with a clean heart one can have this kind of firm belief. Loved your poem, Marilyn.

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Thank you, Khairul, I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.

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Tom Allport 20 July 2018

A poem of belief and trust and love! , .......wonderfully written Marilyn

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Thank you, Tom!

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Rajnish Manga 20 July 2018

A prayer made with utmost humility and faith cannot go unheard. The person feels the presence of God around him or her. Simple words, perfect rhyme and a profound impact leads to the following: I think I'll win, with His hand in mine Yes, I do think I will be just fine!

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Rajinish, I appreciate you so much as you make such sweet comments on my poems. It makes me feel like I want to do better and better.

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Robert Murray Smith 20 July 2018

Your beliefs hold your hand. Nicely penned.++10 Congratulations.

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Thank you, Robert!

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Valsa George 20 July 2018

With His hand held firmly in yours, you are sure to win! A poem of absolute trust and firm faith in God's Providence! A great pick as Poem of the Day! Congratulations!

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valsa george 20 July 2018

With His hand in yours, you are sure to win! A poem of absolute dependence and firm trust in God's providence! A nice pick as poem of the day! Congrats!

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Valsa, I so appreciate you comment, thank you!

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Poetic Voice 20 July 2018

Well wriiten. I am of a different command but your poem has beauty.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 July 2018

lovely praying and remembrance of GOD Begging Lord, oh help me please Felt my tears while on bended knees Loving some so hard to love Still looking to Him up above. nice stanza

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