I trudged my way across the land
I tried so hard to take a stand
Doing what the good book said
Sometimes veering off the road instead.
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A testimony of your faith, appearing in poetic verse- - Lovely job on this! Inspiring, and rightfully deserving of Poem of the Day!
Has god ever actually spoken to you? Have you ever wondered WHY you Believe? The hands I hold are human I understand why Even how The majority still deny their own eyes As long as it leads to peace and love I am with you
Very nice, Marilyn. A truly uplifting, spiritual poem. Your faith is showing through. Congratulations on having this chosen as member poem of the day! Best one we've had in quite some time.
A Beautiful flow of positivity to start the day. There are times when we all need a hand.
A beautiful poem having trust and belief on God. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
Such a lovely poem. A testament of our struggles and our faith. Congratulations Marilyn Lott for an outstanding poem.
A nice poem with a beautiful graphic and an appropriate title. 'with His hand in mine Yes, I do think I will be just fine! ' - only with a clean heart one can have this kind of firm belief. Loved your poem, Marilyn.
A poem of belief and trust and love! , .......wonderfully written Marilyn
A prayer made with utmost humility and faith cannot go unheard. The person feels the presence of God around him or her. Simple words, perfect rhyme and a profound impact leads to the following: I think I'll win, with His hand in mine Yes, I do think I will be just fine!
Rajinish, I appreciate you so much as you make such sweet comments on my poems. It makes me feel like I want to do better and better.
Your beliefs hold your hand. Nicely penned.++10 Congratulations.
With His hand held firmly in yours, you are sure to win! A poem of absolute trust and firm faith in God's Providence! A great pick as Poem of the Day! Congratulations!
With His hand in yours, you are sure to win! A poem of absolute dependence and firm trust in God's providence! A nice pick as poem of the day! Congrats!
Well wriiten. I am of a different command but your poem has beauty.
lovely praying and remembrance of GOD Begging Lord, oh help me please Felt my tears while on bended knees Loving some so hard to love Still looking to Him up above. nice stanza
Reinforcing trust and hope. there is always a new flicker of hope, and that light of hope makes you strong to stand the hardest moment, this is what I found here in this poem. congratulations for being chosen as Poem of the day.