I've fallen from faith's light.
I slipped out of God's sight.
Me, once a gospel defender.
I can't but now be a pretender.
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'Fallen from faith's light I Slipped out of God's sight. Me, once a gospel defender I can't but now be a pretender.' I have this feeling... I'm currently struggling through this... I just had a hard time putting it into words... or even accepting it. You inspire me.
wow.... it's like i want to write again my poem 'From Above' without changing anything... nice write here!
Well penned my Christian brother.. Paul had the same problem that you so eloquently penned
I think most of us are caught up in that struggle, Leslie. Your poem tells it so well. I gave it a 10.
all i can say we are human....... we are bound to do mistakes..... wonderful poem.
So good, it is always a struggle with temptation, and even if we know it is wrong we do it anyway, we must correct ourself all the time. It is lifelong, we must just keep praying for knowledge......very good....10 Linda
nice write....an eye opener...touching...you have a beautiful heart leslie...we may fall but we can never slipped out from God's eyes...He is always willing to pick us up....and just there waiting for us to come back...HUMAN as we are...tend to stumble and fall..but human as we are we can stand up again....esp..if we humble ourselves and accept mistakes....thanks for sharing this kind of piece...it gives lessons in life....10++++++++++++++++
Ten! Bravo! The Lord is my shepard, I shall not want. Linda
VERY STRONG*** if we was not to fall in this life then who would pick us up? a ten
Wow very powerful.. I like how much force you have used in this poem KRISTA
whew! intense, i can feel your struggle there...keep penning.
Word may no be longer my bond good line. this was very interesting to read. good job. Crystal
Excellent though provoking.