When words fail to explain how much you are hurt
When you fall and there’s noone to help you up
When you pray and fast and nothing appear to be moving
When you put all your energy in it but still fail
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If last two lines are not attached with this writing, yet we could feel the 'Most High'. It is sufficient perhaps. And the poem could stand for reader of all field. A good writing thus become universal.But like a preacher (not as a poet) you have put last two lines. Then your 'most high' metaphor is unnecessarily applied with your writing! But as a poem-writer I get stop to read after that to imagine the height of the poet. God writing always carry such interaction. Thank you poet. Write more....more....... Regards, 10+ Apoet Bangla
i honestly think this is a great poem. these words seem to be a true belief, good job. keep writing
another great poem i loved it alot keep writing love ya xoxoxo ellie
His grace is more than sufficent... Grace covers a multitude, , An inspired write. I loved it! ; D
sure his grace is more than sufficient.