Tuesday, February 5, 2019

His First Bike Comments

Rating: 4.0

If he could live one day over, the thing that he would like.
Was to be a boy again on Christmas getting his first bike.
Jumping for joy with all his might.
Enjoying his bike that was out of sight.
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Lamar Cole
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Richard D Remler 06 February 2019

I can relate. Some things you never forget. A fun read. Keep Writing...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 February 2019

Riding everyday is nice and enjoying first bike experience is nicely expressed in this poem.10

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Practicing Poetess 05 February 2019

Ah, the joys of childhood bikeriding! Me, my sister, and my group of girlfriends, exploring new neighbourhoods and coasting down dirt hills! Thanks for the memories, Lamar!

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