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He walks alone, books in hand, staring straight ahead.
He doesn’t notice anyone, even though all eyes go to him.
A guy like him could sit anywhere at lunch, yet he instead….
Opts to eat alone, and that for some reason makes him dim.
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Easily the most unorthodox piece i have read on this site, It's like a screenplay. Amazing work. It's a ripper. Obviously 10.
I can see where your comming from, I realy was sadened by it memories are what make us and ruin us. Good work but may I say just keep it breif and keep the words and emotions strong! NICE tobii :)
i must say this by far was my favorite. i know the kinda guy you described because im very similar.
well worth the read. it was like a movie huh? ? ? i liked this 1 a lot...
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8/2/2025 8:43:04 PM # 1.0.0
They call that puppy love.....all natural....many American songs on this theme... Cheers. Subroto