Monday, August 29, 2016

His Delilah Comments

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He walked along her garden to pick the roses
The thorns pricked his hands but he did not give up
He walked by her river bank to draw some water
The banks had burst-ed but he feared not to be washed away His love for her was like the bush fire
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Rose Kanana
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Mj Lemon 26 November 2016

This is magnificent. Just that second stanza....it's a perfect stand-alone work of art by itself. Great write!

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Karen Kerubo 26 October 2016

Interesting Biblical perspective of today's Samson and Delilah, i like your poems Rose thanks for sharing them.

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Julie Smith 27 September 2016

This poem is amazing and the story of Samson and Delilah fascinates me so much! Perfect poem [3

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2016

A touching story of love and betrayal, nicely penned.

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Ruth Nyokabi 07 September 2016

Well written Rose, true Delilahs aren't loyal. Thanks for your sharing.

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Preston Mwiinga 05 September 2016

wow well written, true that. that is what Delilah can do if she is torerated, Beware of delilah in life. good staff

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Nancy Majau 04 September 2016

creative writer!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

Thinking of this lovely lady! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Linet Sabastian 30 August 2016

Well written. It came out so well, the flow is just so good. Keep writing.

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Jane Biashara 30 August 2016

can i enroll for poetry classes

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Rose Kanana 30 August 2016

once a teacher always one..come baby come

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Jane Biashara 30 August 2016

poor samson, i wish you can see my face when am reading your poems. i smile so broadly until the skin start aching at the end of the poem. keep up girl

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James Mwenda 30 August 2016

I am getting hooked to your descriptive poems Rose.Keep up i loved the Delilah message on betrayal

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2016

Betrayal is so sad. Promising for love revives faith. Very amazing sharing this is definitely. Wisely penned poem shared here...10

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Charity Karimi 29 August 2016

what an amazing way you bring out your description.Truly maybe Delilah great job.

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Collins Waswa 29 August 2016

The theme of betrayal, the things that men go through. Thanks for sharing Rose.

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