Friday, October 21, 2011

His Curse Comments

Rating: 5.0

He sees a long walk up ahead,
but his conscience is heavy with dread,
not because of the path that needs to be stepped,
but because of the secret he has kept.
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Jiggi Gwari
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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

It's a wonderful poem, , i like its imagery, passion and meaning; so well woven all lines, , a graceful write! ! !

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Jiggi Gwari 24 October 2011

Thanks a lot! It is heartwarming to know my poems are being read somewhere and being appreciated too. It means a lot to me.

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Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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