Saturday, January 16, 2016

His Crossing Comments

Rating: 4.0

He is dead. It is over.
Did you see his face before death came;
The cancer deepened furrows
Of his brow; the medicated dilation
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Lynn W. Petty
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Bri Edwards 07 February 2017

yes, it should be (a judgement call on my part of course) the Angel of Dying, or more specifically the Angels of Pain, Discomfort, Inconvenience, Disappointment, Grief, et al, ................ not the Angel of Death, , , , , , , , , , , , , who 'deserve' to be vilified. i plan to embrace Death, but not so much the other stuff! ! ! bri :) to MyPoemList. if i remember, i may use in February showcase, Section B (2017) once it is ready. bri :)

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Dimitrios Galanis 16 January 2016

An elegy to a beloved who pased away a tribute to love which is the substance of tight relationships.Well penned.

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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