Wednesday, July 1, 2009

His Beautiful Eyes Comments

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beautiful eyes need a rest
on a wondrous touch of love
gently wrap with true loving care
from the most prestigeous heart...
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lady grace
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

beauty of his eyes glares no more plenty of sorrows rise in his heart unanswered questions remain unanswered hope always wait....hope never fades...so much beauty in eyes and words.. nothing is to betold or conveyed..... lovely poem with powerful message of love....10 read mine two brighteyes...browneyes..... mary to marry.....

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Noel Horlanda 12 July 2009

As long as one is alive, there's always hope, hope always wait and it never fades.But a beautiful eye is a beautiful window of one's soul and could see hope beyond and it's coming. Lovely, Lady Grace, you're one step beyond other poets in the list. Thanks.

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Kesav Easwaran 05 July 2009

good poem Grace...thanks...10

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I think this poem gives a special message about the need for hope. I think in life if we have something to look forward to with hope, we are more inclined to go on. As usually written with tenderness and love. 10 Karin Anderson

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Ted M 02 July 2009

Lovely poem, written with lot of emotions. Well composed Grace

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~ Jon London ~ 02 July 2009

Oh my lady, this so touching...beautifully written with this touch loving hope...lovely to read as usual my friend...well penned 10++

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Omar Ibrahim 02 July 2009

yes hope never fades.................very good one..........keep writing..

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beautiful eyes need a rest on a wondrous touch of love gently wrap with true loving care from the most prestigeous heart...... true reflcetion in eyes with most gracious read.... lovely poem with clea r msg...10 read mine 'two eyes ' and butterflies around

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Aziz Alkaabi 02 July 2009

hope always wait....hope never fades... A clincher that Carol Harris touched upon. Excellent work, Lady Grace.

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Saadat Tahir 01 July 2009

the poem is as beautiful as his eyes and very well written hope should never fade...for thats the end of everything great poem cheers

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 July 2009

'When eyes of two lovers meet, mouth becomes speechless.' is a saying. Lot more can be written on this, like the one from the Lady Grace.

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Sandra Martyres 01 July 2009

Lovely piece Lady Grace...yes I agree hope needs to be preserved or else we will easily perish

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Afzal Shauq 01 July 2009

yes..he deserve to be praised if he got sweet eyes like you did here... beauty of his eyes glares no more plenty of sorrows rise in his heart unanswered questions remain unanswered hope always wait....hope never fades... well written....10 +++

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Rafique Farooqi 01 July 2009

It is a great write, telling a lot in few lines.......

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Carol Gall 01 July 2009

beautiful lady hope is the answer

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Jason Mcgookin 01 July 2009

beautifully written and sad but theres always that hope and answers may come

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fine write. a lot of compassion is found in this piece.

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Carl Harris 01 July 2009

This is a beautifully expressed and poignant poem, Lady Grace. Today's eye doctors and surgeons can do wonders for people with serious vision problems, things that were only dreamed of a few years ago. You should get this boy to the best specialists, which are probably in Manila, and see what they can do for him. With some luck, they may be able to correct his vision greatly. Carl.

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Surya . 01 July 2009

beautifull eyes will surely shine. it is a matter of tme. kindly read 'tomorrow' a poem that is similar in sentiments.nice write voted10 surya

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rago rago 01 July 2009

hopes of lady grace never fails..... always alive........ smile smile smile! ! ! ....with hopeful smile.............

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