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May The Force Be With You, Always

Your poem provides great insight to what it feels like from all sides of the fence so to speak. Im sorry for all those who have been hurt it shouldnt be that way ever. I know how you feel and im glad you shared this poem.

such great insight a problem not addressed enough

a very touching poem and its real deep and full passion keep up the writing Elizabeth =]

nice....write deep and wow! what more to say! your frankness surprises me!

wow very deep and passionate. very nice work right here.

Wow. I never had to deal with my father being mad, because my father has disowned me for my 16 yrs that I been alive. I know this because I've been there when he's said to friends ' This is my son, or at least that's what they tell me.' The pain was so hard that I told everyone I met that my father had died in a car accident. But fantastic poetry. GOD bless you.

You have dealt with pain from both sides in this profoundly compassionate poem Tyease - and have produced a picture of both boy and man needing help and healing - - the fact of facing this within yourself is bound to have had effect and wishing you future writing of this sort - it is detailed and poetic throughout....10/10 from Fay.

very good, very very good..... i like it

Excellent exploration of an insane conscious. I was glad I was able to read it. You are definitely a budding young writer in a new generation.

very expressive, beautifully written :)

this is very sad. nicely written though..

Very poignant. Very well written

Very emotional great job.. and thanks for reading my poem

Some men are crazy looking what they are or what they have become...10