Sunday, October 16, 2011

His Absence Comments

Rating: ★3.8

She walks in the forest
Alone this time
In a beautiful white dress
It sways as she walks
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Bradley Flowers 23 October 2011

I gave you an eight on this, It's lacking something and i'm not good at explaining those things.. Good poem so keep it up. Just work on writing a connection of words. The flow to me was a little off.

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Blessing Ekpe 20 October 2011

sad, sad lines, captivating

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Dead Leaf 19 October 2011

nice to read......sweet and emotional

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Vipins Puthooran 16 October 2011

It's a nice one, , , emotional poem..

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