Monday, September 12, 2011

Hire! Hire! Human Satire - (A Life Poem) Comments

Rating: 4.3

Mulling over - with staggering steps, he - a toddler!
Pondering over - with heavy steps, he - a rattrap peddler!
With his soul loitering - with careening steps he - a Meddler!
Tarrying about with lurking steps, he - a doodler!
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Harindhar Reddy
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Vipins Puthooran 04 February 2012

There's a path that leads to nowhereLets hire - satire - this man is trapped everywhere. In the age of where east meets west ******** [attitudes deceive us e'erywhere] Excellent poem! ! !

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Harindhar Reddy 22 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏

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Shanavas Maideen 31 October 2011

Oh, cripes! Yup man runs everywhere for everything and gets nothing in end.. He is........ 'Mulling over - with staggering steps, he - a toddler! Pondering over - with heavy steps, he - a rattrap peddler! With his soul loitering - with careening steps he - a Meddler! ' Yes There needs a change in attitudes of the people. A well sent message through the satirical poet. Good amazing write................

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you my friend for a nice comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Harindhar Reddy 22 May 2020

Thank you very much

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 September 2011

Great and expectations are high on this satire of a stepping stone...magnificient write..

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for a wonderful comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Harindhar Reddy 22 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Harindhar Reddy

Harindhar Reddy

Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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