Thursday, January 23, 2020

Hiraeth Comments

Rating: 4.8

Did you not hear my plea?
I'm here all alone crying out
This heart of mine feels heavy
Only your comfort I've sought.
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Rommel Galicia
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Bri Edwards 23 February 2020

st.2 " evanescent : tending to vanish like vapor" You can't " withstand" OR " stand" it? " hiraeth" ..." implies the meaning of missing a time, an era, or a person - including homesickness for what may not exist any longer." " allay transitive verb To calm or pacify (an emotion): set to rest" Last stanza: an English-language-oncologist might help here. he or she or it is missed! : ( Bri :)

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Sekharan Pookkat 25 January 2020

Beautiful poem that depicted on love i love its craft

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Chinedu Dike 23 January 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth in verse with rhythmic splendour. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Galicia.

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