Saturday, April 4, 2009

Hints Of Taste. Comments

Rating: 5.0

A hint of warm fruit in whispered word
Lasts me all summer long. - Songs
Of romance in verse heat me like fire.
At the sound of your name flames
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Fay Slimm
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Fiona Davidson 04 April 2009

Stunning prose Fay simply stunning....thank you...Fi 10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 04 April 2009

Sort of fringes on the spices of love.

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Tsira Goge 04 April 2009

Fay, Beautiful and an impressive hint...10... Tsira

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Catrina Heart 04 April 2009

A hint of warm fruit in whispered word Lasts me all summer long. - Songs ------- lovely lines...Fay! You have created a beautiful and stunning composition here with fine rhymes and rhythm, and so nice poetic language used........10

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Fay, listen.. listen closely Our heart are beating... The same beat... thump... thump.... how you knew? ? ? welcome back!

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Fay Slimm

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