Hindi Poem- Astitv Comments

Kayi Sathi Pa Liye Maine, Par Sath Hi Na Pa Payi Thi, Royi Thi Main Par Aasu Sukh Gaye The, Hasi Bhi Thi Shayad Par Aatma Jhuthi Ho Gayi Thi, ............... very nice apoorva... aisa hai ki yeh feeling to ham sab ki life mein aati hai..but very few of us are able to portray it on a piece of paper..and you did it.. congrats you have got a regular visitor now..i am sure i would like your more poems... hope to see some more soon.. all the best.. 10 from me..

astitva means............ ummmmmmmmm existence, identity, reality well in this context it means my true self..........

OMG! ! ! What a poem.... Maan na padega...kya likha he....lol... It's an awesome....though i still dont know the meanin of ASTITVA.... Pls tell me in english what it is.... But i enjoyed ur poem..... Well done small poetess....hats off....