सूर्य का अवतरण ढूँढते रह गए (Hindi) Comments
सूर्य का अवतरण ढूँढते रह गए
हम उजाले के कण ढूँढते रह गए
मोतियों की तरह रास्ते भर कहीं
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A beautiful ghazal, every line is wonderful......................10
It is a big compliment to have received a word of appreciation from you, Sir. Thanks.
A spot on description of human tendencies. Thank you Sir. Hum aapki kavita padhne ke baad, duniya bhula, waah waah karte rah gaye.
Thanks for your lovely comments, Somya ji. Two lines added by you in Hindi have made my day.
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7/28/2025 7:42:14 PM # 1.0.0
Outstanding Poem, Rajnishji...Kya baat hai...Khas taur per अपने होने का परचम हिलाते हुये इक निरापद शरण ढूँढते रह गए.....Wah wah Dheron daad.
अपनी सभी रचनाओं में यह कविता (Gazal: सूर्य का अवतरण ढूँढते रह गए) मुझे भी बहुत प्रिय है. आपको यह कविता अच्छी लगी, यह मेरे लिये अत्यंत संतोष की बात है. बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद, मित्र मो. आसिम जी.