Be there as the highest peak
Not essentially to differ
Not eventually to conjure
Be there as a genuine will
...
Read full text
Good writing Reema! I had also written a poem long time back with the same title, which you may like to read. -Raj Nandy
I noticed, that often every line of your poems brings its own message, every line starts like a sentence and with capital letter. The poem is rich of meaning and shows the beauty of the unique mountain in many different aspects...
I am inspired, It is fine, I have felt smell The Himalaya...... 10.. Best wishes, Tsira
Very nice poem. Enjoyed it very much. Take a look at Athul and Akhil who are young poets. But their poems are super.
yes let us join hands to erect this peak as high as possible where all the beauties visible to its ultimate form... very well composed, and thought rendering....liked reading it...
Very interesting long poem. Nice.