Monday, January 26, 2009

Him On My Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see him and my mind wanders
My mind wonders and ponders

I wonder of things that are
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Emily Oldham 09 May 2009

lovely poem with some nice phrases. thanks, Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Sameer Ahmed 31 January 2009

A wonderful flow of words describing the overwhelming effect of the adored one on your mind and his influence seems quite magical that you wish to keep him there...............10/10 Best WIshes Sameer

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