Him...No...Him (2) Comments

Every poem that I read of you, seems to leave me baffled! Very nice write!

Oh, it's very interesting. I'll wait.

i can see the words, , very good.you might wont to work on the last line...........

...need to wait a bit longer.....yes. Run long...write more...

This is fantastic! ! I love your way of telling a story in poetry! !

i like the rhyme scheme but still prefer the first.

I like it! Wonder who the poor young dame will choose, can not wait for the conclusion! Nicely written Ralph! ! !

OMG Ralph! ! ! there s more...smiles... shakes head I love this...intresting....its quite brillant really. Cant wait to read more.

wow...i love this! so will have to wait for him...no..him (3)

Another bravo, Ralph I just love your style and your vision! Fantastic!